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storiesjanuary 12, 2009 9:13pmSalty
Wow, you ate his "Love Arm"? Is that what you kids do in Med School?

Anyways, I like the Poe-esque meter and old timey words. I also liked how you used metaphysical imagery to counterpoint the surrealism of the underlying metaphor.
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